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英语四级写作补充 作文实例一 题 目:Bicycle一an Important Means of Transport in China 提纲:(1)自行车在中国这样普及 (2)和汽车的比较 (3)自行车在中国的前途 Score 14 Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people一man and woman, old and young一ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycle^^. Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, It is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover, they often cause traffic jams and accidents. In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quiet a long time. Score 11 There millions of bicycles in today s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people s daily lives. Because to rife a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle doesn t need oil but the rider s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China. Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car. I think the population of China s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that ifs quality will be improved. Score 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesn t ask to build the garage like a car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesn t need any oil, and it can cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles. Score 5 Perha