【精品】成考专升本英语作文写作要点分析
成考专升本英语作文写作要点分析 第一部分写作授课要点 短文写作总分20分。短文写作部分要求考生写出一篇80字左右的短文。题材以记叙文 为主,试卷可能给出题目或规定情景或段首句。 短文写作的要求为:能够正确表达思想,意义连贯,无重大语言错误。 写作内容涉及生活,一般常识和私人信件。 短文写作中的题目我们也可以称作命题写作。 情景写作也就是便条写作。 段首句式的写作可以称为主题句式的写作。 一、英语写作训练的要点 英语写作最重要的一点是用英语思维进行写作。 通病:习惯于先把作文翻译成汉语,然后逐字翻译成英语。 在理解和使用英语词汇时,要注意英语和汉语在意义上的不同。 中文:我得努力学习,要不我就要落后了。 错译:I should study hard, otherwise I would be backward. 正译:I should study hard, otherwise I would lag behind. 说明:“backward”是形容词,意为落后的,向后的或缓慢的,(表示性质);Tag behind” 是动词词组,意为落后,落在后面(表示动作或行为)。 中文:你不要学我样,你身体没有我好。(指:情况不一样。) 错译: Never learn from me, since you are not so strong as I am. 正译: Don t follow my example, since you are not so strong as I am. 说明:“Learnfix)msb.”指“向某人学习”,并不是“照我一样做”的意思。 中文:由于时间关系,我就到此为止。 错译:Due to the time, I should stop here. 正译: As time is up (or: limited) , I am afraid I have to stop here. 说明:“due to.”是“由于之故”而导致某种结果的意思,本句用due to不合逻辑。 accept 和 receive, permit 和 promise, call one s name 和 call one by name. accept收到(接受) receive 收到(不一定接受) permit允许别人做某事 promise允许为别人做某事 call one s name 骂某人 call one by name 叫某人的姓名 所以我们在从事英语写作训练的时候: 1. 要明确英语写作的意义。 2. 要学习和掌握必要的写作理论。 3. 要通过大量的阅读,新概念第二册比较适合。 二、如何限题和写提纲 定题:选择恰当的题目。 命题:“Teaching” 过于笼统:Teaching 仍较广泛:Teaching Number Concept 范围缩小:Teaching Number Concept to Children 范围明确:Teaching Number Concept to Children at Five 命题“Child Behaviour,, 过于笼统:Child Behaviour 仍较广泛:How Children Play Together 范围缩小:How Girls Play Together 范围明确:Patterns of Play Among Primary School Girl Students 写提纲的好处:1.可以扩大思路 2. 可以按次序排好素材 3. 将文章分成段 4. 明确写作的中心思想 “The Advantages of Travel (旅行的益处。)“ 根据这一题目,在构思时可能会想到以下内容: 1. seeing strange and different things (看到各种奇异的东西) 2. meeting people with different interests (遇到有各种不同兴趣的人) 3. keeping us fit and healthy (有助于身体健康) 4. enjoying beautiful scenery (欣赏各地美景) 5. understanding how people live ( 了 解人们怎样生活) 6. visiting famous cities and scenic spots (浏览名城和名胜) 7. tasting different foods and local flavours (品尝各地风味) 8. getting ideas of the conditions and customs of other people ( 了 解各地风土人情) 9. arousing the fervent love for our motherland (激起对祖国的热爱) 10. gaining knowledge of geography and history (获得地理历史知识) 11. making one less narrow minded (使人心胸开阔) 12. gaining other knowledge (获得其他方面知识) 13. seeing places read of in books (目睹曾在书上读到过的地方) I. enjoy places of interest a. enjoy beautiful scenery in different places (4) b. see places read of in books (13) c. visit famous cities and scenic spots (6) IL know people and their customs a. meet people with different interest (2) b. see strange and different things (1) c. get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people (8) d. taste different foods and local flavours (7) e. understand how people live in different ways(5) III. benefit us both mentally and physically a. gain knowledge of geography and history (10) b. gain other knowledge (12) c. arouse the fervent love for our motherland (9) d. keep us healthy(3) e. make one less narrow minded (11) The Advantages of Travel