读后续写考场高分句型

读后续写高分句型读后续写高分句型 1. 1. Doing.,Doing., 主主+ +谓谓 After/before doing,After/before doing, 主谓主谓 While/when doing,While/when doing, 主谓主谓 Done.,Done.,主主+ +谓谓 doingdoing 作状语，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；有时作状语，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；有时 可以在可以在 doingdoing 前加前加 before, after, whilebefore, after, while等等; ; 但如果是被动关系，应该但如果是被动关系，应该 使用过去分词使用过去分词 donedone 作状语。例如：作状语。例如： 例子：例子：Pointing to a spot on her dress, she said, “Right here is wherePointing to a spot on her dress, she said, “Right here is where my mommy kissed my dress.my mommy kissed my dress. 例子：例子：RealizingRealizing the factsthe facts thatthat I I couldn tcouldn t affordafford my further studies,my further studies, I I had to stop chasing my dream.had to stop chasing my dream. 翻译一：跪下来，她轻轻地将女孩抱在怀中。翻译一：跪下来，她轻轻地将女孩抱在怀中。 例子：例子：When feeling hungry, I just drank water to fill my stomach.When feeling hungry, I just drank water to fill my stomach. 翻译二：当翻译二：当 5)5)After knowing I had a good command of English, he offered me aAfter knowing I had a good command of English, he offered me a typingtypingjob,job,promisedpromisedtototeachteachmemecomputercomputerandandprovidedprovided accommodation.accommodation. 6)6) Slowly turning the pages, I suddenly saw a picture of my beautifulSlowly turning the pages, I suddenly saw a picture of my beautiful daughter Beth, which instantly grabbed my heart and transported medaughter Beth, which instantly grabbed my heart and transported me back in time.back in time. Kneeling down, she gently held the girl in her arms.Kneeling down, she gently held the girl in her arms. 2. 2. 主主+ +谓谓., doing, doing. doingdoing 作伴随状语，与句子的谓语动词同时发生，逻辑主语与句子作伴随状语，与句子的谓语动词同时发生，逻辑主语与句子 的主语一致，构成主动关系；该句型可以以并列谓语的形式出现，的主语一致，构成主动关系；该句型可以以并列谓语的形式出现， 转化为：主转化为：主+ +谓谓.and.and 谓谓.;.; 但如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词但如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词 donedone 作伴随状语。例如：作伴随状语。例如： 1)1) MyMy mother,mother, twotwo brothersbrothers andand I I spentspent nearlynearly everyevery nightnight ridingriding around the city in our white Ford, singing every song we could thinkaround the city in our white Ford, singing every song we could think of.of. 2) I didn t move but instead stared blankly into my pillow, refusing to2) I didn t move but instead stared blankly into my pillow, refusing to acknowledge(acknowledge(理会理会) her presence.) her presence. 3) I gazed down at the street, holding out(3) I gazed down at the street, holding out( 抱有，抱着抱有，抱着) hope that my) hope that my mother would carry with a tin of her famous cookies.mother would carry with a tin of her famous cookies. 4) Mom always encouraged me to take education seriously, saying it4) Mom always encouraged me to take education seriously, saying it was the only way we could break away from the present situation.was the only way we could break away from the present situation. 5)5) TheThe womanwoman gatheredgathered herher belongingsbelongings andand headedheaded toto thethe gategate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude man.quickly, refusing to look back at the rude man. 6)6) SheShe waswas gettinggetting angrierang