读后续写练习写作指导 讲义- -2023届高考英语复习写作备考

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。 Two things changed my life: my mother and a bike basket. It s true. I would be a different person if my mom hadn t turned a bike basket into a life lesson I carry with me today-a lesson about the value of efforts. My mother and father were united in their way of raising children, but it mostly fell to my mother to actually carry it out. Looking back, I honestly don t know how she did it. Managing the family budget must have been a very hard task, but she made it look effortless. If we complained about not having what another kid did, we d hear something like,UI don t care what so-and-so got for his birthday. You are not getting a TV in your room a big party.” We had to earn our allowance （零花钱）by doing chores（家庭杂务） around the house. I can still remember how long it took to polish the legs of our coffee table. My brothers can no doubt remember hours spent cleaning the house. We had to keep track of our belongings, and if something was lost, it was not replaced. It was one summer day. My mother drove me to the bike shop to get a tire fixed——and there it was in the window——white, shiny, plastic and decorated with flowers. The basket winked at me and I knew-I had to have it. “It s beautiful,“ my mother said when I pointed it out to her.44What a neat basket.” 1 tried to hold off at first, but then I couldn,t stand it any longer.uMom, please can 1 get it? I ll do anything, please, Mom, please?” I was desperate. “You know,“ she said, gently rubbing my back while we both stared at what I believed was the coolest thing ever,uIf you save up, you could buy this yourself.” “By the time I have earned enough, ifll have gone! Someone else will buy it. Please, Mom, please?” “There might be another way,“ she said. 注意： 1 .续写词数应为 150左右; 2 .请按如下格式作答。 ,1 ,17/ buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,f, f, Mom explained. Mom explained. Finally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on other s bikesiFinally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on other s bikesi 试题分析 • 人物： Mother：用她的特有的方式持家育儿——希望孩子们通过自己的努力得到自己想 要的 I：想要一个与自行车匹配的“车篮” • 事件： 妈妈勤俭持家，不仅把家事理的很好，而且教育子女很有自己的方法。有一天， 妈妈 开车带我去自行车店修轮胎，我看到橱柜里展示着的漂亮的篮子，非常渴望拥有， 但是妈 妈说需要我自己的努力才能得到。于是，…… • 主题：（第一段就点出） Two things changed my life: my mother and a bike basket. It s true. I would be a different person if my mom hadn t turned a bike basket into a life lesson I carry with me today—a lesson about the value of efforts. • 续写情节安排： 第一段： ①（与开头句衔接） 为了得到车篮，答应妈妈的要求 ②每天努力地完成“双倍”的家务，甚至于还主动干些其他的事情 ③随着时间的推移，我的零花钱总算攒够了（与第二段开头句衔接） 第二段： ①（与开头句衔接） 看到人家也有同样的车篮的时候，心理是怎么想的，与妈妈是怎么沟通的 ②妈妈对此事做出怎么样的反应 ③（主题升华，首尾呼应） 点出主题：经过努力得到的才是最好的 下水作文 * 77/ buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,” Mom explained.buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,” Mom explained. Though it was a challenging task, thinking that I could have such a beautiful bike