托福满分作文惯用的4种结尾
智课网智课网 TOEFLTOEFL 备考资料备考资料 托福满分作文惯用的 4 种结尾 摘要 一篇让托福写作考官满意的作文,不光要有一个漂亮的开头,一个精彩的结尾对于 这篇文章而言同样重要。有不少的考生认为,只要有好的开头就好,考官不会认真看结尾部 分。其实你错了,写作也一样需要善始善终。有一个精彩的结尾也能让你的托福写作增色不 少。如果你想要明天考试托福写作满分,不妨尝试一下以下 4 种结尾招式。 满分作文惯用的 4 种结尾 写作招式一回答问题 E.g.1 When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good,I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’,in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology,because it can be our friend and support our way of life. 这个结尾段落明确地提出了自己的观点,不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全 没有用处的。 写作招式二不要添加新的信息 E.g.2 Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define What factors are important in achieving happinessLike self-awareness,this is also very difficult to achieve’but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness. 用一句话明确自己的观点,幸福很难定义,可能有两个因素起到作用。 广告时间参加马叔 托福 保分班的童鞋,9 月 5 日的保分成绩出来啦想考 100的宝宝们, 还不快快入群 写作招式三2-3 个句子为宜 E.g.3 Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagreeFinally,I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether,which is the last thing parents would want. 两句话,作者的态度很明确,学生不可能花所有的时间去学习,否则就会完全失去对学习 的兴趣,所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。一般在结尾段的最开始部分,考生就应该给考 官一个明确的信号词,让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。 这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句信号词Finally,to sum up,in conclusion,in brief,therefore,thus,overall 句型 1. it can be concluded that 2. we can find that 3. I think it is also important to remember that 4. the main point is to make sure that 5. I believe that/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that 写作招式四可采用的技巧 1.总结式重述前文把在前文中的观点在结尾段进行重述,但是不能出现与开头段或者题目 中的单词重复。 E.g.4 *In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the cause of this What solutions can you suggest Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this,and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support,because this is no longer a problem for individual families,but for society as a whole. 把 solutions 进行简单地再次描写父母、好的托儿所、政府的资金扶助。 *Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced I think,therefore,that governments need to raise this awareness in the generalpublic.Children can be educated about environmental issues at school,but adults need to take action.Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging,such as plastic bags,b