雅思写作整理笔记

・ The graphs describe units of electricity production by fuel source, including coal, oil, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power, in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000. ・ In Australia, coal power in 2000 was 2.6 times as many as in 1980, 50 units. The units of oil and natural gas dropped sharply from 10 in 1980 to 2 and 20 in 1980 to 2 respectively. Hydropower in 2000 36 units was 0.8 times more than in 1980. ・ In France, coal produced the same units of 25 in 1980 and 2000, while oil generated 25 units in 2000, 5 unites more than in 1980. Natural gas decreased 11.5 times, from 25 to 2. Hydropower in 1980 was 2.5 times more than in 2000, 2 units in total. Clearly, France witnessed more than 8 times increase in nuclear power, from 15 units to 126. ・ As can be seen from the charts, 130 in 170 units of total production was made by coal in Australia, while 126 in 180 units went to nuclear power in France. 宁柏宇 剑四plOO Introduction改写题目 The line chart v. , and are v-ed in the bar charto , 成果 The line chart reveals visits to and from Britain and UK travelers top 5 favorite nations in 1999 are indicated in the bar graph. Bodyl The visitsincreased greaHy 1图标描述的主体-替换或代词2动词-本3副词-本 from abouT 12 T。57 million 4变化 from 1979 也 1999. 5时间 强调2中时态increased increase 预期is expected / predicted to increase 强调 34 中about / around / roughly / more or less 大约 from about 12 to 53 million 高级版本的 There was a sharp increase in the visits 3 21 from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999. 4 5 A sharp increase was seen in the visits 326 1 from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999. 45 更多见笔记本 6.5分成果 According to the line chart, visits abroad by UK residents increased from about 12 to 57 million from 1979 to 1999. While, overseas travelers to Britain went up from about 10 to 27million. It is obvious that UK tourists were more and climbed faster than overseas ones during the period. 个段就3句话 Accord i ng to the chart one,细线怎么着（句型）。wh i I e, 粗线怎么着（句型）。It is obvious that,做比较（细线 比粗线多且上升快）。 Body2 -6.5分成果 The bar graph demonstrates that the most UK visitors went to France and Spain, which were 11.0 and 9.5 million. Also, many British travelers were attracted by the USA4.0 million, Greece3.5 million and Turkey2.0 million. 高级版 The bar graph demonslrates that France and Spain were the favorite countries for UK tourists in 1999, which attracted around 11.0 and 9.5 million UK visitors respectively. Remotely/CLOSELY following were 远远跟在后面的是the USA, Greece and Turkey with 4.0, 3.5 and 2.0 million travelers separately. 比较或总结 6.5成果 What is also worth mentioning is that 还值得一提的 是almost 40 UK tourists selected France and Spain in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole. 高级版 What is also worth mentioning is that France and Spain alone accounted for almost 40 percent of UK tourists abroad in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole. 剑四p54 Introducti