Howtobetterourcomposition导学案高三英语写作指导
How to better our composition [Topic] Writing [Aim] To write a good essay [Keys] To improve the writing skills 【Important alms】选用恰当的词汇,根据特定的语境准确使 用英语语法。 CDijfcult aims]使用一定的句型、词汇,能够清晰地传递信 息、表达主题。 STEP 1 Accuracy 先正确 A.阅卷老师最深恶痛绝的错误 1. There are most of people hold the opinion that do rcises does a great good to our healthy. 2. Under your help, he make a great progress. 3. As we are all known,... 4.1 have difficult in English. 5.1t has bad efforts/affects on us. 6.1t is benifitial to us. 7.Im appreciated that you help me in English. 8.1t9s of vital important. 9. Not only does good to us, but also... 10. Only by this way, you can live a happy life. 11. Helping plays an important role , Because help others is help ourself. 12. To his surprise, he came cross his old friend and spended 3 days together. 13. Write back to me as possible as we can. 14.1 want you do it. 15. As the time going by, he still keeps up a good state of mind. 16. But for you help, I cant flnish the work. 17.1 leave the first impression on the country. 18. We can ask help for teachers. We should attach importance on it. 19. The more harder you study, the more progress you make. 20. Hardly did he arrived when he recived a phone call. B. Correct the following passages. 1 My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parents went to work in the fields taking my little sister with Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fall into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. ⑵ May I have your attention, please I have an announcement make. The Student Union is going to hold a party in Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be hold in the roof garden of the Main Building. It begin at 730 p.m. There will have music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gift. Everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish. Dont forget 730, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. Everybody is welcomed. STEP 2 Advanced 后高级 丰富的词汇 Rich vocabulary rcises A. lie live stand hang run/flow sit go float the playground. a map of China, a farm house. In front of the building On the wall of the room At the foot of the hill On the top of the mountain a tall tree. Behind our school a river. On the surface of water a fallen leave. There the bell. Once upon a time there an old man. B. l.We all think he is a ereat man. We all him . 2. The courage to speak English is important. It is the courage to speak English that 3. There are twenty・six classrooms in our school.